Swap out generalities for specifics where it counts.
Look for opportunities to bring us into the scenes more.
We taste, smell, and touch it in our imagination.
Make a producer drool over your dinner scene, or feel the textures of something. Beginners will write “They eat in the restaurant,”
but a producer might perk up more if you say, “They devour fried cheddar cheese curds with a dark microbrew at Bob’s Diner.”
Create a real world with all 5 senses, BUT don’t over-do it on every page. This trick needs to be finessed.